Flickering Flame
Something new from me… I have been slightly uninspired as of late, but here is something at last!
I haven’t had the chance to really read it through, often when I’m uninspired I can’t read it back otherwise I lose any desire to write anything else… too critical, that’s me!
But anyway, I’ll stop rambling… here is my latest piece. Please do leave a comment if you have any thoughts, that’s one of my favourite bits! Hearing what others think. 
Dawn is breaking,
the sun is creeping,
shadows are fleeing,
slithering into eerie corners,
the sky’s darkness overcoming
by the wholeness of the sun,
and the flames flicker;
the sun is creeping,
shadows are fleeing,
slithering into eerie corners,
the sky’s darkness overcoming
by the wholeness of the sun,
and the flames flicker;
a single stab at life,
a burst of hope,
the chance of more,
the flames flicker in my heart
as dawn arrives
leaving me with an ounce
of flickering hope.
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LOL @ Jack’s Comment. =P I guess it is nice to see you break free from one of those teenage moods and try to tackle another theme. And I have to say, a lovely one indeed. I love the idea of mixing dawn and hope together. While it might be considered to be cliched, I believe you’ve managed to convey the feelings of what hope can be. You’ve improved
Great.Really nice. Nice to see you getting away from all that lust and love stuff.